Rough drafts from before chapter ten are archived. I'll start placing roughs from 10 onward right here...
So, I was revamping the whole site and when I started to play with the glory pages I realized I needed to fix a few things within the ten chapters currently in the finished area. Mostly I made sure all the facts lined up, there were no misspelled words, and other things like using the same word too many times and all that. This was done directly to the finished chapters, so the only way you'd be able to check the changes now would be using the ebook or printed book copies that I made when I had archived the older pages. I didn't bother to keep copies of the changes I just made in here.
Suddenly felt like writing Chapter Eleven and putting it up here.

Robin Joy Wirth
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